I only did an style correction, don't worry, the story is the same one, this the kind of tale I wanted to read and write, I hope someone solve the Kenyata trouble ^_^
Earth was no longer what it was in the past. Feelings of love, despair, anger and friendship no longer existed.
In an effort to stop the global war that broke out 15 years ago, a Controlling Virus was released from a government containment facility, normally used to imprison the enemy.
The hope was that it would calm people's emotions and stop the global war... only it worked too well and spread uncontrolablly, and rapidly.
By 2015 the virus had spread throughout the world. War had stopped, but at the price of losing who you were. There had been unknown side effects that scientists had predicted, which would manifest within 15 years from the time of infection.
There were very few in the world that were immune to the virus. One of them was one of the scientist working on the virus, currently is still in the lab, trying to find what the side effects would be.
It was difficult, as people that were affected stopped communicating all together, they only live to eat and sleep. Some of those had different reactions to the virus, some going mad, others just lay still and died, And others just talked nonsense.
But Kenyata, after years of preparing and planing, had no more time to waste and set out on his journey in search of those that were not infected, in hopes of helping or assisting him in finding a cure.
I only did an style correction, don't worry, the story is the same one, this the kind of tale I wanted to read and write, I hope someone solve the Kenyata trouble ^_^
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jermccloud (228)
Don't write much but I have been looking for something like this for sometime. Hope everyone has enjoyed this website has much as I have!
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This sounds like a great start to a cool story. I can't wait to see what happens. :)