She wasn't sure of what was going on or how she got there, but she could see the entire room. The yellow curtains on the windows, the pine dresser on the side wall, the white cat sleeping in the corner and in the center of it all, the bed where she could see her own body, in deep sleep.
And there she was, looking down at herself sleeping and all she could think was "How can it be?!".
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well, i really like this - it jumps straight in and sets the scene with good descrptions of the environment and grabs the raeders attention; shame there's not more of it!